Monday, June 7, 2010

Manhater

*DISCLAIMER: I saw this entry at my old blog site. It made me laugh reading this. Napaka-kiddie. :))*

     I haven’t written for a couple of months but hey, im back, trying to make a nonsense freeverse poem for everyone else of you to relate with. Wish you could get yourself into it. If it makes sense, though. Hope it doesn’t sound too bad or worse, hope it doesn’t suck  that much. ;) 


"Manhater"

You always pinch my cheeks that only you adore,
The only one that soulfully makes my mind sore.
You’re the one who tucks me inside those arms,
The only one that gives me a restless warmth.

You left me alone under the cold pouring rain,
Feeling so helpless struggling through the endless pain.
With that very moment, wished I could be numb,
But felt sorry for myself I just became dumb.

For once, you made me happy it nearly made me scream,
But now it will never happen even in my wildest dream.
Not just once, you made me feel so hurt,
All those times,I have to make my feelings blurt.

Nevertheless, I can only state,
After all the heartaches I’ve been through,
I’ll still never be…
A goddamn manhater. :D

     I'm allowing you to laugh at my work. I know it is funneeeh! :))

8 comments:

BuNnYLuBerz said...

nice writing. haha manhater

Meann said...

wow!hahaha..makata ka pla jam eh.wahahaha...
galing ah..ako ndi marunong gumwa ng poem eh.hahaha..lalo pa't english.hahahah..ewan..di ko lang cguro talent.hahahah..

panu pla baguhin ung profile?san nakakakuha ng mga mgagandang profile layouts?hahhah..thankz...mwah!

Jenina Java said...

ikaw gumagawa ng ganyan? hahahaha. =D



=l
pfffttttttttt.



=D
hahahahahaha.


=))
haha.

natawa ako kasi: nung isang araw habang hinahanap ko ung syllabus/notes ng socio class ko nung 2007, may nakita akong notebook. ung notebook na un, parang random diary ko nung 3rd year highschool(2005). GRABE. laughtrip din. alam mo ung napa childish mind pa talaga about "L-O-V-E". at aminado akong kinakahiya ko yun. buti yang sayo nilabas mo? hahaha. atleast alam kong hindi ako nag iisa. pffft. =l hahahahahahaha. =D =D

Ayra Denise Baltazar said...

whuttt. haha. nice one, ate jam <3
didn't know you write poems. love!

CANDYTUFT said...

OHMY! You have good future!
You can write good poems so well.

Elai :] said...

Bunny: Thankyou. Hindi pa naman ako manhater. :)
Meann: Hahaha! Ewan ko sayo. Bad ka. Sa blogskins.com. =))
Jen: Maiintindihan naman siguro tayo ng mga makakabasa. Bata pa tayo nung pinaggagagawa natin to. :D Alam mo ilabas mi na rin yang sayo. Para damay damay na. XD
Ayra: Thankyou. If I know tinawanan mo din ako. Nakakatawa talaga. Kakaloka! ;)
Candy: Salamat! I'll try to write more poems. :]

Jenina Java said...

more of a chat type siya ee. wait nga, try ko ipost. laughtrip. =D

Elai :] said...

I'll wait for it, Jen. :p

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